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A glass full of reflection
A pocket full of change
Muddy Waters drown sorrows;
warmly sliding past the chill

Eager is the hustler
Willing is the fool
Mingled like two angry lovers
Broken glass and shattered you
©2007-2009 ~Santavez
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:iconlecco:
Ooh, I like this...reminds me of 'The Hustler' hardcore.

I love the last stanza especially.
:iconprincepoo:
i love work like this, where the imagery/metaphors slide by so effortlessly that the connection is only made a few lines later. there's a lyrical, softspoken nature to it that makes it even more powerful.


[been a while]

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like that made sense.
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Thank you! I appreciate the appreciation! You're still my favorite artist on dA...

[I've been lost in translation]

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~Santavez : TheHell.Ru A truly deviant Web Comic - Episode 1

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August 12, 2007
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